Advert - Evaluation

The brief for the advert assignment was to create an advert, talking about preventing Identity theft on-line through social networking and communication sites. My primary target audience is mainly aimed towards teenagers aged between 15 and 19 year old males and females which like to go out with their friends to the cinema. My secondary target audience is aimed towards 7 and 14 year olds because they are the people that would watch TV and the adverts that would come on. I think that my advert is ideal for both my audience because the advert is childish which would appeal more to them which also has a bit of humour included.

My final idea was to create an advert that appeals to my targeted audience. To look at what I came up with, look at my blog via MY PITCH V.1.

Advert - Final

My Advert's Logo

Shot List / Actors/Casting / Clothing / Set / Props / Equipment & Budget

Shot List

1. High angle of set (Try to make it look like an Internet Café)
2. Extreme Close up of actor 1’s face
3. Close up of actor 1 browsing on the internet for a product (Film PC screen)
4. Extreme close up of PC screen showing the bank details of actor 1 (Film Checkout of any online store)
5. Close up of actor 1 spilling coffee over himself
6. Mid shot of actor 1 walking off to the toilet to clean himself up
7. Panning shot of actor 1 walking away from PC
8. Tilt from down upwards showing actor 2
9. Close up of actor 2 reading a newspaper and then drops paper dramatically and lunges forward to actor 1’s PC
10. Panning shot of actor 2 (Thief) coming towards and steals the bank details from the PC
11. Long shot of actor 1 catching actor 2 in the act
12. Low angle of actor 1 showing dominance
13. High angle of actor 2 showing weakness and at the same time being taken away by the police
14. Pack shot including Logo, slogan and website

Actors / Casting

Actor 1 = Worker (Has laptop him where he is going to buy a product from Amazon)

Actor 2 = ID Thief (Reads a newspaper before dramatically lunging out of their seat and takes the worker’s bank details)

Police = Themselves

Clothing

The actors clothes would be drawn on to them due to them being miniature figures.

Set

An Internet café that is open to anyone in the public, mainly people aged from 16-25 year old males and females.

Props

1.     A set of an Internet café (miniaturized)

2.     Miniaturized mechanical figurines (For actors)

3.     Laptop / Laptop screen

Equipment & Budget

Sony HD Camera – (From School Mac room)

Tri-pod - (From School Mac room)

Dolly - (From School Mac room)

iStop Motion - (From School Mac room)

Free because all of it is going to loaned from the school

Rationale for Final Idea

The public service advert that my peers have chosen out of the 2 pitches is the one with more detail because it is more detailed than the other one as well as it appealing to my targeted audience more.

My pitch v.1

My pitch v2

Results Of Primary Research

1.     How old are you?

13-14                        15-16                        17-18                        19-20                        21+                       

2.     Are you aware of the home office campaign?

Yes                        No

3.     What campaigns are you aware of for Identity Theft?

4.     Have your details ever been online? (EG. Buying a product)

Yes                        No

5.     What website would you say that you use the most?

6.     What form of device do you use to purchase a product online?

Mobile Phone                        PC                        Laptop                        Other

7.     What social networking websites do you use the most?

FaceBook                        Twitter                        MySpace                        Other

8.     How trustworthy do you think that the websites that you use are?

Generally Safe                        Generally Neutral                        Risky                        Not at all

Unit 3 id theft questionnaire results

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Define & Research Target Audience

Key Target Audience:

• Male:Female     80%:20%
• Average Age:   16-19
• Targeted mainly towards 16 year old males.
• 90% of audience have a broadband connection.

Primary Research 1: Questionnaire

1. Do you have an Internet connection?
2. Do you do online shopping?

Primary & Secondary Research into Conventions and Style of Production

Public service adverts often tend to aim to raise awareness of a certain issue, affect public attitudes and potentially help the victims to take action.

The adverts used messages that were practically saying, whatever happens, all cases can be prevented. The 3 adverts have used techniques such as shock and surrealism (Cyber Bullying), solution to problem and shock (Abuse advert) and for the NHS advert, they used surrealism (child smoking a crayon with smoke coming out of it) guilt and shock. All 3 had a lot of conventions between them. Some of which were:

• Voice-over
• A clear, effective message
• Action line (NHS)
• Logo (Cyber bullying and NHS)
• All 3 adverts were around about 30 seconds long in duration
• Clear narrative (NHS and Cyber bullying)
• And all of them included music.

A successful medium product can be made out of any of these public service adverts by including conventions such as having a voice-over, a clear and effective message, making it 30 seconds in duration and including a clear narrative.

Some lines of appeal that I will include in my advert would be: Shock, surrealism, solution to problem and fear.

All 3 of these adverts had different target audiences.

Cyber bulling advert: For Cyber bullying, it is aimed towards social networking users aged from 12 to 19 whose hobbies include tweeting and talking to friends on other social networking websites. The message of this advert is that you can talk to anyone at all if you are being physically and/or emotionally bullied. The mise en scene within this advert is a girl's bedroom that endures close-ups of a picture of herself with her mum. This could connote that she could speak to her but decided that she would rather keep it a secret.

NHS Smoking advert: In the NHS Smoking advert, the targeted audience would be adults with children which like to mirror their parents in what they do, such as smoking. The message of this advert is that children would copy anything that their parents do, including pretending to smoke which would probably encourage the children to smoke in the future. The mise en scene in this advert is in various houses where parents smoke which could one day encourage their kids to smoke when they are older. This could also connote that when one of the parents was throwing their cigarette into the toy truck, the child could of picked up and played with the truck aswell as the cigarette.

Abuse advert: For the Abuse advert, the primary targeted audience was 14-18 year old females whose hobbies are going out with friends and their boyfriend. The secondary target audience is 14-17 year old males that also like to go out with their friends but also get harassed by their girlfriends. The message of this advert is to be strong and overcome any problems that you have with the people that you love. The mise en scene is once again in a girl's bedroom which could suggest that her boyfriend has things to play with such as objects to her his girlfriend with. These could be objects such as a photo frame or a desk. The mise en scene could also connote that she 'loves' her boyfriend due to the way that she is looking at him in the picture below.

Identity Theft Research

Facts & Figures

Credit Card Fraud - 28%
Phone & Utilities Fraud - 19%
Bank Fraud - 18%
Employment Fraud - 13%
Government Document & Benefits Fraud - 8%
Loan Fraud - 6%
Attempted Fraud - 6%
Other (Such as Social networking and communication websites) - 22%

• In 34% of the cases, someone obtained credit card info, forged a card in their name and used it to make purchases.
• 11% lost or had their wallet/purse stolen, using the identity to create a new identity for themselves.

• The risk of your identity being stolen has become such a reality, that many of the major insurance companies are now including "Identity Theft Insurance" protection in the insurance policies for renters and homeowners.
• You are vulnerable not only when your wallet, important papers and credit cards are stolen, but you Must also protect the areas that lead
  to these items being stolen.

http://www.beyondidentitytheft.com/

• Identity theft is the fastest growing crime in the United Kingdom and America.
• The number of identity theft incidents has reached 9.9 million a year, according to the Federal Trade Commission.
• It takes the average victim an estimated $500 and 30 hours to resolve each identity theft crime.
• Studies have shown that it’s becoming more common for the ones stealing your identity to be those closest to you. One study found 32% of identity theft victims discovered a family member or relative was responsible for stealing their identity. That same study found 18% were victimized by a friend, neighbor or in-home employee.
• Only 28% of identity theft cases involve credit or financial fraud. Phone, utility, bank and employment fraud make up another 50% of cases.
  
  
  

  http://www.transunion.com/personal-credit/identity-theft-and-fraud/identity-theft-facts.page
  
  
  5 tips on how to avoid ID Theft

  
  

Ø Watch for shoulder-surfers. When entering a PIN number or a credit card number in an ATM machine, at a phone booth, or even on a computer at work, be aware of who is nearby and make sure nobody is peering over your shoulder to make a note of the keys you’re pressing.

Ø Require photo ID verification. Rather than signing the backs of your credit cards, you can write “See Photo ID”. In many cases, store clerks don’t even look at the signature block on the credit card, and a thief could just as easily use your credit card to make online or telephone purchases which don’t require signature verification, but for those rare cases where they do actually verify the signature, you may get some added security by directing them to also make sure you match the picture on the photo ID.

Ø Shred everything. One of the ways that would-be identity thieves acquire information is through “dumpster-diving”, aka trash-picking. If you are throwing out bills and credit card statements, old credit card or ATM receipts, medical statements or even junk-mail solicitations for credit cards and mortgages, you may be leaving too much information lying about. Buy a personal shredder and shred all papers with PII on them before disposing of them.

Ø Be diligent about checking statements. This actually has two benefits. First, if you are diligent about checking your bank and credit statements each month, you will be aware if one of them doesn’t arrive and that can alert you that perhaps someone stole it from your mailbox or while it was in transit. Second, you can ensure that the charges, purchases or other entries on the statement are legitimate and match up with your records so that you can quickly identify and address any suspicious activity.

Ø Pay your bills at the post office. Never leave your paid bills in your mailbox to be sent out. A thief who raids your mailbox would be able to acquire a slew of critical information in one envelope- your name, address, credit account number, your bank information including the routing number and account number from the bottom of the check, and a copy of your signature from your check for forgery purposes just for starters. Drop your bills at the post office or at least in an official U.S. Postal Service drop box to ensure that doesn’t happen.

Link to above facts and figures: http://netsecurity.about.com/od/newsandeditorial1/a/aaidenttheft_2.htm

3 Websites that promote awareness about Identity Theft

1. http://www.crimestoppers-uk.org/fraud/types-of-fraud/online-fraud/identity-theft-and-fraud
2. http://www.identitytheft.org.uk/
3. http://www.direct.gov.uk/en/governmentcitizensandrights/yourrightsandresponsibilities/dg_10031451

Existing campaigns against ID Theft

- http://www.dmaresponsibility.org/AvoIDTheft/
- http://www.ncpc.org/newsroom/current-campaigns/identity-theft

In my advert, I shall include some facts and statistics to make my advert seem more believable and realistic due to the amount of figure that would be included. I would also include some of the tips from my research in my work because I thought that they were quite good to use as the topic is Identity Theft.